I learned a lot from this one. A big lesson I took away from this was not to overcomplicate parts of the artwork I don't want the viewer to focus on, and to save major areas of contrast for the part I do want them looking at. In addition, I draw their attention to these places using leading lines. The wisdom of the priestess has been conferred to the takos...and the takos are very thankful.

AGAIN THANK YOU SOO MUCH INA-SENSEI!!! Originally I only asked for value and color feedback only, but I'm so glad you did composition as well. It was so much needed, I didn't even realise...

Today I learnt lots of new stuff and also validated some things that I already knew but hesitated to apply to my works. Thank you Ina-sensei!

in need to up my dictionary of art gonna have to look back to older art streams thanks to this inya :)

*TIMESTAMPS* (Start: 2:41 / Ina's Art: 3:10:53) ——————— *[FEEDBACK ARTWORK]* 10:46 *Original Art 1: Kimono Calli By **_(haitang_21)_* ┗12:06 Ina’s Feedback ver 1: Calli With Pony tails! ┗ 28:41 Ina’s Feedback ver 2: Calli With adjusted Hair Circle 35:14 *Original Art 2: VIolet Ina By: **_(NowaruArt)_* ┗40:53 Ina’s Feedback ver: 1:00:30 *Original Art 3: Ina by the window by **_(dcpvvle)_* ┗ 1:36:40 Ina’s Feedback ver: Compostion changes + removed Candle *[EUROBEAT BGM REMIXES]* 2:12:46 *BGM:* Violet Remix - Ninomae Ina’nis 2:17:36 *BGM:* REBELLION - holoEN Advent 2:21:50 *BGM:* Moment of my Life - IRyS 2:27:23 *BGM:* Brand New Start - Nananshi Mumei 2:31:33 *BGM:* ABOVE BELOW - holoEN Justice 2:35:34 *BGM:* Say My Name - Nerissa Ravencroft 2:39:13 *BGM:* Let Me Stay here - Ceres Fauna 2:43:48 *BGM:* PSYCHO - Hakos Baelz 2:47:16 *BGM:* ChikuTaku - Amelia Watson 2:51:15 *BGM:* 蒼天に燃ゆ (Souten ni Moyu) - Ouro Kronii 2:55:18 *BGM:* UnAlive - Calliope Mori 3:00:19 *BGM:* Born To Be ”BAU”DOL - Fuwamoco 3:04:55 *BGM:* Pineapple - Takanshi Kiara 3:08:01 *BGM:* Violet Remix - Ninomae Ina’nis ——————— ——————— *FULL TIMSTMAPS PART 1* *[Intro]* 2:39 *“WAH~!”* 3:00 It’s been a while since the last drawing stream.. 3:45 A Last Inacademy Was _2 years ago…_ 4:40 Are we Excited for the *Myth 5th Anniversary live?* 4:50 Opening her Sugary Drink 6:33 There were going to be 3 Inacademy streams (2 Art and One being Feedback) but the submissions were so good Ina will do some feedback Today! *[Disclaimer]* 7:14 - Ina is stepping out of her comfort zone Giving feedback, and Art is very subjective.. ┗7:40 _Subjectivity example_ - People who Comment: “I like the 10 years ago version better” 8:01 - Her feedback will be what she would do if she were going to make the art piece! 8:28 - Ina did a couple off stream as practice 9:20 - The more specific Request The better her advice can be ——————— *FAN ARTWORK 1: Kimono Calli By (haitang_21)* *[Art 1 Introduction]* 10:46 *Original Art Image:* Drawing of Kimono Calli with death sensei! 11:12 *Their Concern:* I'd like to get feedback on my colour and rendering! Specifically about the colour choices and rendering of the hair and clothes, I felt like I maybe overdid it with the detailing for the hair, etc, would love to hear your thoughts on it :D_ 12:06 *Ina’s Feedback ver Image:* *[Feedback 1: The Hair Shape and contrast]* 13:15 Whenever you are working on something, what do you want to show the audience? 14:01 In the area I want people to view the most *(The Focal point)* I would like to have the *most Contrast, *And the *most detail..* 14:31 The shape of the hair wasn't leading towards the f@ce, and it’s Very saturated overall 15:54 Made The silhouette of the head More visible, *[Feedback 2: Values of the Scythe]* 16:11 One of the first things Do is Value check 16:36 The scythe: reduced the detail/ values to focus on the F@ce 17:11 Ina’s eyes are drawn more to the scythe than the F@ce in the original work *[Feedback 3: Leading Lines]* 17:31 Leading Lines TO the Focal Point 18:14 “pony tails are so versatile” *[Feedback 4: F@ce Colour / Lighting]* 18:37 Ina ended up lightening the F@ce 19:21 She did this by changing the color slightly.. *[Feedback 5: White of the Eyes Darkened]* 20:15 The Value of the Eyeball Was changed to match the shadows 20:40 It looks a little more natural if the eyeball is darker as well *[Feedback 6: Binarization / Shaping the Light]* 21:05 Ina SUPER TIP Binarization! 21:27 There wasn't a bunch of Big Planes / Shapes To Define the light, She added This Area *[Feedback 7: SImplified Hair details]* 22:25 Filled in the details on the hair around the chin area *[Feedback 8: Kimono Accuracy]* 22:53 Changed the shape of the kimono - This is where references come in handy! 23:01 “Kimono’s are one of the most difficult types of clothing to draw 23:03 Changed the collar on the kimono *[Feedback 9: Lightning the Darkest Values]* 23:53 Why Ina decreased the darkness is again to focus on the Focal point that is the F@ce *[Feedback 10: How Ina adds back the Original hair circle!]* 24:46 For the circle in the hair, it wasn't the same size as calli's head, it's competing to be the focal point 25:16 -26:06 INa Adjusts the Original hair in Real time 26:40 Her pointy Tial hair is Was Just INa having fun experimenting 27:19 Ina Likes The New Circle in the Hair! 27:37 *Art Tip:* Why Art is Trial and Error, YOu do something and come back and actually like something else better! 28:41 Old hair Mixed WIth Ina’sFeedback artwork! *[Feedback 11: Lowered Accessory Values / Highlights]* 29:10 The Accessories Ina ended up Lowering the Value of the Golden Apart 29:50 Keep the Light Source in mind! *[ART TIP]* 31:00 Another thing Ina learned relatively recently.. 31:30 Say you’re Standing Under A Bridge, It's so bright you can barley view outside -> 32:18 Overexposure / barely visible Light Details 32:22 If You’re Artwork is in the shadow, You Don't have to add as much details in to the light 34:00 *Doodle Example:* ——————— *(CONTINUED IN PART 2 IN THE REPLIES)* ——————— o7

Thank you, Ina-sensei, for your time and efforts! That was a very cool stream to watch! I don't draw, but I have admiration for those who do, and I can honestly say that I will not look at artwork the same way again! Absolutely incredible work, as always. It's great that you're reaching out to do new things to not just help others grow but also increase your skills further Never knew how inspiring it could be to watch you draw, while listening to Hololive Eurobeat! BU BU!

for the comfy stream Ina. Rest well and have a nderful rest of your day.

Thank you for your feedback✨, Ina sensei!💜 Your feedback is so invaluable to me! I’m truly amazed by the corrections you made to my artwork! I have taken notes and learned many important things from your feedback!🌟 I also took notes on which areas and studies i should focus on next and improve (especially foreshortening, it looks very challenging~ owo;). Everything i learn from this will be reflected in my future artworks! This really gives me hope, hype, and motivation to keep drawing! Thank you again for the opportunity to receive your feedback, sensei! <(≧ ﹏ ≦)>

Thanks for the art class

Thanks for Inacademy streaming! this is really a lot of knowledge!

This is such an eye opener! Thank you for the enlightenment Inya-senseiiiii!

Thank you for streaming Ina 💜💜💜

I am happy this is back it is always so insightful. I also just like chilling while watching art being drawn its very nice.

11:11 I want it as PC Background. It's soooooo beautiful.

thanks for the amazing stream INA. I have great respect for your work and for the excellent explanations and feedback..

31:13 this "light/darkness perspective explanation when a photo is being taken" is gonna get me to rank up when looking through a window in R6 thanks Inya 💜

WAH!!

Ina, so cute.

Even if you didn't submit anything or don't get picked, there's a ton of neat tips to learn from here!! The MV art looks super cute so far, sleep well Ina

waiting for part 2

There is much to digest from today. Being able to see the changes made really helps see and understand the improvements. For many, its an inspiration to get a review from Ina. Ina really paid attention to the drawings. I'm certain even one thing is enough to really motivate someone. It's hard to keep drawings when ur tired. I've admired art for so long. I still can't get enough of your drawings Ina

Love the art review and Ina perspective on the pieces. I am sure their creators can make good use from this feedback for future projects. I would love to see an Inacademy one day, where similar to how kiara invited her cosplayers, you could invite some artists to a colab (maybe behind chibis you made for them so no real faces needed in discord or so). Like Pako sensei and co. Maybe where you yourself present art to them, you feel like you are lacking in some aspect that that particular artist does well.

😊😊😊💜💕🥰🥰🥰💜✨️💕

Thank you for the return of Inacademy Ina! Watching you correct the submissions and then explaining your corrections was very insightful and fun! Drawing actually takes a lot of brainpower and thinking, doesn't it. It was also fun watching you draw the illustration for the cover of *ahem* a song that definitely hasn't been revealed to us yet. Good work getting the line art done! Please rest lots and get lots of sleep Ina!

Goodday

Ahh Inacademy streams are always a blessing! So much knowledge shared Ina! I enjoy how you recognize the artists on your fan base, how you always admire, encourage and helps them to get better! very much, it means a lot!

soka so desu ne

for the Inacademy stream! I feel like my skull is filling with knowledge and my singular braincell have grown a bit What would PT sensei say about your sleep schedule🤔 Please sleep well

This takes me back. Thanks for the Inacademy, oh Great Purple One~ 💜